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    forever damned

    title: Forever damned

    How could you do this?
    You destoryed who i am
    You didnt care
    You left me forever damned
    I tried to break free
    But you chained me to the ground
    You Kept me there
    Without a word or sound

    I'm forever damned
    You didnt care
    I cant break free
    You're no longer there
    I'm becoming this
    I dont know what to do
    I'd rather die
    than become like you

    Down in the depths of darkness
    My soul has crept
    Tears of blood
    In my heart, i wept
    Forever damned
    How could this be?
    You left me alone
    I have to set myself free

    You took my heart
    and threw it out
    I yearn for freedom
    I scream and shout
    Yet i cant be free
    A monster is what i am
    I can never be the same
    I'm forever damned....




    its just something i wrote like a few weeks ago, tell me wut u think of it please, thank u!!

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    very nice poem...keep up the good work
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    hehe, thanx

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    like swordsman said, nice poem.

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    gracias ^_^

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    nice work good job

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    Quote Originally Posted by DollFace
    gracias ^_^
    de nada sigue a si y te convertiras en un/a gran poeta/isa.
    this a good poem,i like it.

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    This was very, very good. It rhymed! (Well, because my poems never really rhyme) And this was deep with emotion. Nice work.

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