very nice poem...keep up the good work![]()
title: Forever damned
How could you do this?
You destoryed who i am
You didnt care
You left me forever damned
I tried to break free
But you chained me to the ground
You Kept me there
Without a word or sound
I'm forever damned
You didnt care
I cant break free
You're no longer there
I'm becoming this
I dont know what to do
I'd rather die
than become like you
Down in the depths of darkness
My soul has crept
Tears of blood
In my heart, i wept
Forever damned
How could this be?
You left me alone
I have to set myself free
You took my heart
and threw it out
I yearn for freedom
I scream and shout
Yet i cant be free
A monster is what i am
I can never be the same
I'm forever damned....
its just something i wrote like a few weeks ago, tell me wut u think of it please, thank u!!
very nice poem...keep up the good work![]()
I won't let this world exist without me! If I die, we all die! / Avatar & Signature by anime_8000.
hehe, thanx
like swordsman said, nice poem.
gracias ^_^
nice work good job
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de nada sigue a si y te convertiras en un/a gran poeta/isa.Originally Posted by DollFace
this a good poem,i like it.![]()
This was very, very good. It rhymed! (Well, because my poems never really rhyme) And this was deep with emotion. Nice work.
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