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    Friend

    You started my dream,
    all over again...
    of the first time,
    I talked to you,
    and you liked me.
    how could this happen,
    to a man like me.
    losing it all,
    and still having something,
    to hold on to.
    or having someone to share,
    my joy with.
    alas it was not you,
    who came to me,
    but a friend of yours.
    and because of your friend,
    and my kindness...
    or should I say ours,
    that we are such good friends.
    If only a love in you I had,
    then all would be heaven on Earth,
    but it cannot be....
    well at least your sweeter,
    than the very honey of the Earth,
    and gentler than a baby's skin.
    may we forever be,
    friends....



    By Justin McCormick

    To Amandra.... my sweetest, most kind friend.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    great one, nice poem

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    Aww... this was really good. I think it's one of your best I've read so far. :] But why can;t you be with Amandra? That's rather sad. :T

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    Kind and very sweet, its clear you have the talent to write great poems, especcially sad ones. Great work and try to cheer up a bit.

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    Justin you can be with me in your heart and soul. I will be there for you no matter what i love you justin. Love Amandra
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    Hey Justin that was great I really like to here the positive when it comes to my friends and that soulds very positive. I hope you and Amandra do get together and last.
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

    A'Karuya (the young warrior)

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    Nice poem!

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