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    Otaku MuMu Champion Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart's Avatar
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    friendlessness

    This is how it starts,
    first a friend...
    then i get attatched...
    then i care about them...
    then i lose them....
    it never fails....
    why am i crying about losing you........?
    .....
    .....
    why must i dry my tears?
    was it because,
    you actually said you cared?
    no one cares...
    at least it seems.
    i work all the time,
    even in my spare time,
    and i'm not apprieciated.
    yeah... people like my poetry,
    but who knows me...
    no one unfortunately.
    who can say they know Shakespeare?
    no one lived with him,
    and no one here knew about him.
    they know OF him,
    what he's DONE,
    but not who he WAS....
    history can't tell us this,
    and neither can anyone.
    i feel the same,
    as if i am already dead,
    and forgotten by history.
    ...
    doomed to live and die,
    and be forgotten,
    before I am even a corpse.
    so is my fate....
    alone............................................. ..................................................
    (the echo of nothingness is heard forever)


    Justin (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Nice work, its so emooo................

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    Great poem! So sad and emotioonal.And I love that at the end: "(the echo of nothingness is heard forever)" Terrific job!
    "I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
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    who's it for?
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    who?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tithe
    who's it for?
    Someone who I thought I'd still be friends after all these years in this town of mine... now they're gone. don't worry, this always happens. that's more of the SHADE... sadness, hurt, mirth... the usual. the reason for the black and mask...

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    very nice!! it held so much emotion in it it was amazing!! not too long eeither!! godd -no great job!!
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    such a touching peice....i really like it.

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    Your poem was good. It brought out a lot of emotions in me. *tear. You seem really sad. Cheer up! :]

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