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    Gazing at Beauty.

    Who be that fair maiden,
    or doth mine eyes deceive me,
    fooling my heart,
    with false glamour.

    She is more beautiful than,
    any word can hope to desribe.

    what i wouldn't give,
    just to kiss those soft,
    sweet pink lips.

    who's very touch,
    could melt the artic tundra itself.

    Those soft spheres of amber,
    that strongly gleam,
    like the rays of the sun.
    so light the gaze,
    yet so vivid the message.

    her skin just so soft.

    softer than the clouds,
    that are gently laid,
    in the skies above.

    so gently her skin was placed.

    vibrant the light colored hair,
    so colorful and bright.

    even it's softness,
    rivaling the skin,
    flowing down to touch it so.

    only a moment's glance,
    and already my heart betrays me.

    wanting what it cannot have,
    what i seek desperately.

    heart so dear,
    calm thyself.

    she cannot be yours.

    she doesn't even know you exist,
    and thus cannot love you so.

    how my heart wishes it weren't so,
    how it would break from my body,
    and leap onto her,
    killing this man.

    if only to die in her arms,
    the wish....


    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    "When you see true beauty time stops for a moment..... only to fly by soon after."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    um.. it's nice... a little to.. umm... luvy duby for me XD
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    it is a tad on the cushy side, but well written anyhow..

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    Yes well written, a girl you wrote it for would love it.

    Talk less, Say More. Eat Less, Chew More. Whine Less, Breath More. Fear Less, Hope More. Hate Less, Love More.
    And all good things are yours

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    If only she knew... but she never will being of AO.... Just wish I could tell her.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Haha...u write like a new Romeo or something..LOL XD..jk...unless u take it as a compliment ^_^....very well thought out...very descriptive...and so luvy duvy!! ^_~....haha...jus like me...hard enough to figure out how to tell that special someone

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