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    Smile Gedah Flaou (Poem)

    Rose petals remind me of you.
    Soft and beautiful.
    I call you,
    Gedah Flaou,
    which means Garden Flower.
    yeah it's my own language,
    and corny as hell,
    but you liked it.
    "that's nice",
    you reply.
    being a friend,
    my only one in this town.
    guess I was meant to meet,
    someone as nice as you,
    to get me through this mess.
    I actually look forward to work,
    knowing that you could be there.
    when i'm down and in pain
    a nice smile and talking with you,
    just makes my day.
    this is what i missed in my youth.
    now an adult and still pained,
    but getting better thanks to you.
    thanks my friend,
    Ty Gedah Flaou,
    The Garden Flower....

    By Justin McCormick "To my new friend and co-worker Shelley."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    hey [shade/k' heart] you never run out of idea do ya, i wish i can write like this to my gf but ooh well forget it i dont want to think about it eny-way good job and keep up the good work Ninja of Poetic Art chill

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    yeah,,,your poem is alwyas full of meaning in it...
    another great one of your pieces^_^

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    Once again, a great job, i love it.

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    Yea! Good one again! But this one's happier!

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