god almighty

*animechick* · Apr 25, 2005, 08:19 PM

life can end quickly
even if your'e not ready
He is in control

*kenshi2885* · Apr 25, 2005, 08:34 PM

that's true another good one nnniiiiicccceeee

!lord nikon · Apr 25, 2005, 11:17 PM

like it short, you know that,

T Elocin · Apr 27, 2005, 03:25 PM

I like them but don't you think they're kinda ... too short?

*animechick* · Apr 28, 2005, 07:21 PM

well see for school we were required to make haikus for english so i thoguth id put em up for the hell of it...weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

*esthered* · Apr 29, 2005, 03:10 AM

It's too short.... I don't get the meaning, but I liked all your other poems. :S

Apr 25, 2005, 08:19 PM	#1 (permalink)
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kenshi2885 AO Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Inside the physical body Posts: 219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	that's true another good one nnniiiiicccceeee
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!lord nikon Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: NOWHERE Posts: 1,229 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -200	like it short, you know that,
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T Elocin Newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Virginia, US Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	I like them but don't you think they're kinda ... too short?
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animechick new piks in mem gallery Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: texas Posts: 813 Thanks: 3 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 2,894	well see for school we were required to make haikus for english so i thoguth id put em up for the hell of it...weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee __________________ sig by SasuraiHell [[*she wanted to be a dancer, now all she wants is to be with you*]] www.myspace.com/mourningtonight
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esthered Alucard's Lover Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Perth Posts: 352 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	It's too short.... I don't get the meaning, but I liked all your other poems. :S __________________
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