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    Grim Reality [Poem]

    Grim Reality

    Staring at the crystal glass wall
    You looked at your reflection
    Much like an angel, in a solid depression

    You tried to fly
    And then you got so high

    Until you hit the limits
    Placed so meanly upon you
    Not even to make shatter

    You reached for the sky
    As you screamed and shouted
    On the inside

    But nothing was there
    Except the bare open air

    When you began to fall
    You asked yourself
    Why you even tried to fly at all

    The bottom reaching near
    You still have no fear
    For you've felt it all before

    You lay there in the ashes of defeat
    Num from everything
    While you think

    Should I try again
    Only to fall in the end?

    I'm not one for writting poems exactly, for me it's all about the story.
    Last edited by Lady Sasumi; May 22, 2005 at 04:19 PM.

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    kool poem lady sasumi keep it up!!!!!!!!^^!!!!!!!!!!

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    h e l l o,

    i dont think i can try again, and i hate how days and blinks change when she isnt their anymore (

    you want knowlesge. read this book.

    The four Agreements. (toltec wisdom)

    dont let my words be empty, i only speak what i mean.

    good luck in your feelings and dont be clouded and i wish you many good dreams for i have lost mine and only have foud my fears.


    -simple
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    The four Agreements, hmmm... I'll check it out.
    Last edited by Lady Sasumi; May 23, 2005 at 02:19 PM.

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    kool poem and keep up and good work

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    very amazing poem. (i can relate to it) keep it up if you can. i'd like to see more
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