Happy Face [P]

*esthered* · Apr 30, 2005, 09:14 AM

Happy Face

Daylight breaks in;

My mind awakes.

Time to put on my happy face.

An inner voice fights, struggles.

Tears bleed in my heart.

Why must things go this way?

Loneliness is something you must overcome.

The happy face greets people and smiles,

But never to herself.

The happy face laughs and jokes in class,

But never know the true meaning of happiness.

The happy face...

Remains...

Notes: This is a poem I wrote like a few days back because my mom's returning to her home country soon and leaving me alone in Perth again. It's like... a fear of being alone, and pretending to enjoy yourself... I don't know. I think this is rather bad. :S

!lord nikon · Apr 30, 2005, 10:14 AM

Lonelyness is truly bad, I like your poem, nice one.

*narrator* · Apr 30, 2005, 10:27 AM

Good poem, cheer up though, you'll be just fine i'm sure of it. Great stuff

*dark angel swordsman* · Apr 30, 2005, 11:30 AM

yea very beautiful poem

!Kikinaki · Apr 30, 2005, 06:39 PM

Some periodes of life makes you write stuff that are rather good than bad, just like your poem Esthered

*animechick* · May 01, 2005, 08:07 PM

wow sooo sooo sad but really a meaningful one!! hope everything works out and member you always have ur friends here at ao!!

*kenshi2885* · May 01, 2005, 11:06 PM

nice work good job

Apr 30, 2005, 09:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
esthered Alucard's Lover Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Perth Posts: 352 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Happy Face [P] Happy Face Daylight breaks in; My mind awakes. Time to put on my happy face. An inner voice fights, struggles. Tears bleed in my heart. Why must things go this way? Loneliness is something you must overcome. The happy face greets people and smiles, But never to herself. The happy face laughs and jokes in class, But never know the true meaning of happiness. The happy face... Remains... Notes: This is a poem I wrote like a few days back because my mom's returning to her home country soon and leaving me alone in Perth again. It's like... a fear of being alone, and pretending to enjoy yourself... I don't know. I think this is rather bad. :S __________________
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Apr 30, 2005, 10:14 AM	#2 (permalink)
!lord nikon Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: NOWHERE Posts: 1,229 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lonelyness is truly bad, I like your poem, nice one.
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Apr 30, 2005, 10:27 AM	#3 (permalink)
narrator Self Banned and Loving it Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Check the cellar.... Posts: 1,990 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good poem, cheer up though, you'll be just fine i'm sure of it. Great stuff __________________
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Apr 30, 2005, 11:30 AM	#4 (permalink)
dark angel swordsman Messenger of Despair Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: New York Posts: 1,979 Thanks: 2 Thanked 9 Times in 7 Posts	yea very beautiful poem __________________ If you're lucky, I may give you a tiny sliver of my godliness.
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!Kikinaki Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 246 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Some periodes of life makes you write stuff that are rather good than bad, just like your poem Esthered
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animechick new piks in mem gallery Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: texas Posts: 813 Thanks: 3 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts	wow sooo sooo sad but really a meaningful one!! hope everything works out and member you always have ur friends here at ao!! __________________ im really doin this!! start making money today! <a href="http://www.fusioncash.net/?ref=ke101544"><img src="http://www.fusioncash.net/sig.php/0e40e75b752dx3.png" alt="Free Money at FusionCash!" title="Free Money at FusionCash!" border="0"></a>
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