![]() |
| Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community! | Anime Online Rulez! |
| |||||||
| | LinkBack | Thread Tools | Display Modes |
| | #1 (permalink) |
| AO Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Over The Hills And Far Away
Posts: 136
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Heaven As you sit across from me I notice my own Decadentcy That has made me a refugee Then your wonderous eyes fall upon me I want to look away but I can't As my mind raves and rants You stand up and walk on over And my ears kick up like Red Rover And my heart melts like the chocolate of Stover You sit down beside me and slide your chair closer I turn to you and I can not Speak You turn away and the outcome looks leak So I muster my strength and without warning I kiss you so I can end my inner mourning Then I wake to a grey morning Just another god damn dream I wish I could break the seam Between what we call reality And my dreams which I call heaven I miss you Ashley And I'll never forget Thee. Tell me what you think of it. I like how I used Russell Stover seeing as Russell happens to be the name given to me by my mother and father.
__________________ This pain is sratching at my bone. And this Loneliness won't leave me alone. |
| Status: Offline
|
| | #3 (permalink) | |
| AO Member | Teases you about loving Ashley. j/k Nice poem, I'm not really much for sad love poems. It's well written though, for the most part. One question though, did you mean bleak instead of leak? Quote:
Last edited by Lady Sasumi; May 23, 2005 at 01:47 PM. | |
| Status: Offline
|
| | #4 (permalink) |
| AO Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Over The Hills And Far Away
Posts: 136
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Its a sad story just like the ones I write in my spare time. Just like the stories I write it is also a good one. Well not as good as my little make believe stories but as far as true stories go it is good.
__________________ This pain is sratching at my bone. And this Loneliness won't leave me alone. |
| Status: Offline
|