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In Heavens Eyes
These blue skies
In heavens eyes
These green meadows
Flourish with the reddest roses
This crisp, humble ocean
Abundant with beauty
Beyond our comprehension
Beyond our reach
So all we can do
Is sit and watch
As nature takes its toll
On these majestic lands
And turns the seasonal clock
Like it turns the clock of our ages
Our ancestors
Our kin
And all of our loved ones
Shall all one day
Be part of this majesty
:D A little poem I wrote and gave in to poetry.com. It was just something I made up in under 5 minutes. Little did I know I would get it published in a book @_@. I keep getting letter saying that my poem is really good, its been chose for this, that, and the other thing. It annoys me. I'm never doing somethign like that again. Anyway, I have the book now. Right on the 1st page. I'm happy as it is. My poetry is mine, and I dont really want millions of people reading it. Just my friends and people I know, like your guys :) So waddya think?
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I love it....and i did that before...sent a poem in to that contest...never again man..i never bought the book..but they kept sending me emails i never replyed to...i cant stand tons of people reading my poetry...like how we do at school..you'll take a poem and start breaking it down...trying to force a meaning out of the words...nah..ill pass on that
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:Thumbd: Heh, we did that in my school too. I didnt pay attention much though...
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ah...well thats school for ya...cant wait to get out of there...
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I kinda like this poem...got that lil mystical feel to it :D .....but i think that its also got some good meaning to it too...keep writing! :thumb:
