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    Her

    There is no remorse
    Upon this death defying course
    So lead the way and I will follow
    Because inside I feel so hollow
    As if my life has been torn away
    And I have nothing left to say
    So I wonder why it has to be this way
    Cause I only feel myself stray
    Go quickly because we tarry to long
    Just looking for a way to end this song
    She leads me further down the hole
    Picking and picking until there is nothing left of my soul
    The sight of her beauty is killing me
    I beg her to leave so I can go free
    But she hears me not nor acknowledges that I exist
    Sometimes I wonder why I persist
    When I could easily slit my wrist
    Then maybe I'll be able to see through the mist
    If I'm lucky I'll find a light at the end of the tunnel
    Or maybe a hole at the bottom of the funnel

    Seeing her again I begin to crumble
    i feel a rumble and a bouble
    I think she knows she's in trouble
    Because up until now my rath has been subtle
    So now I must say I've put her life to an end
    Because I've severed her pretty little head
    This pain is sratching at my bone.
    And this Loneliness won't leave me alone.

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    Nice riming dude, great job.

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    great poem dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Truly magnificent! You wrote a great poem there, well done!
    Last edited by Kikinaki; May 07, 2005 at 05:19 AM.

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