This vacantness within me
Is eating at my soul
No longer do I care or love
No longer am I whole
Emptiness fills my heart
As 'nothing' rips my soul apart
This hollow shell that holds my name
Has no feelings; has no shame
By now, I surly have no doubt
I'm dying from the inside out.
The beast is only in my head
Yet, easily rips me to a shread
Tattered, broken, but still empty I lay...
I'll stay silent, and hollow for all my days.......
Fantastic!! Wow. You know what, I totally have respect for people like you who can depict sadness so wonderfully. I love it, and I assure you I totally understand the meaning of your poem. This is great stuff! :]
:D wow its so beautiful T.T
Very nice... I hope if your hurting that you get better soon.
Gee; thanks guys! Your comments make me feel better to know that someone likes my poetry:) (No one at school gets me)
just keep your head up and your spirit high. :) very nice writing.
its so nice reading your