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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Hollow (poem) This vacantness within me Is eating at my soul No longer do I care or love No longer am I whole Emptiness fills my heart As 'nothing' rips my soul apart This hollow shell that holds my name Has no feelings; has no shame By now, I surly have no doubt I'm dying from the inside out. The beast is only in my head Yet, easily rips me to a shread Tattered, broken, but still empty I lay... I'll stay silent, and hollow for all my days....... |
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| Alucard's Lover | Fantastic!! Wow. You know what, I totally have respect for people like you who can depict sadness so wonderfully. I love it, and I assure you I totally understand the meaning of your poem. This is great stuff! :]
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,449 | Very nice... I hope if your hurting that you get better soon.
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