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    Hollow (poem)

    This vacantness within me
    Is eating at my soul
    No longer do I care or love
    No longer am I whole
    Emptiness fills my heart
    As 'nothing' rips my soul apart
    This hollow shell that holds my name
    Has no feelings; has no shame
    By now, I surly have no doubt
    I'm dying from the inside out.
    The beast is only in my head
    Yet, easily rips me to a shread
    Tattered, broken, but still empty I lay...
    I'll stay silent, and hollow for all my days.......

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    Fantastic!! Wow. You know what, I totally have respect for people like you who can depict sadness so wonderfully. I love it, and I assure you I totally understand the meaning of your poem. This is great stuff! :]

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    wow its so beautiful T.T
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    Very nice... I hope if your hurting that you get better soon.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Gee; thanks guys! Your comments make me feel better to know that someone likes my poetry (No one at school gets me)

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    just keep your head up and your spirit high. very nice writing.

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    nice job!!!
    its so nice reading your
    wonderful poems^_^...

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