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    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
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    Unhappy "I thought you were"

    I thought you were a rose
    I thought you were my hope
    I thought you were my great love
    I thought you were the purest girl in the world
    I thought you were my life
    I thought you were everything in my life
    I thought you were my hearth that kept me alive
    I thought you were my dream
    I thought you were the greatest person in my world.

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    That's really great dude its like a deep love good job

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    bittersweet and very touching. lovely writing.

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    Nice. I like it. [especially the redundancy of "I thought you were"]

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    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
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    Thanks for all your comments.

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    This one was good with the "I though you were.." repetitions. It wasn't bad! I liked it. Simple and pretty painful, but bittersweet.

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    wow really shows you ppl arent wat youthought huh?like some ppl who you think you can trust and you think they trust you but then they tell you there in love with your best friend only 6 days after thay person freaks cause you went for coffee with an old guy friend because they didnt trust you ebnpugh to be alom=ne with a guy? ok ill go bac to my happi place now.....
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    ketaro,

    I LOVE YOU!!!!

    that is my new fav poem
    wow i like how you made it. good work you really put your emotion into those words, cause im sure your not the only one who has felt that, cause i have and its hard.

    -simple

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