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    If its ok ....

    I would like to put some of my songs on here that I wrote recently.....
    So here you go ( they wouldbe played to dark gothic Heavy metal)

    YET AN OTHER BROKEN HEART

    An other broken heart? Where does it start?
    It starts with twisted thought of pride,
    Which leads to brokenness inside,
    We kill our dignity by letting this unwanted abyss….into our mind.
    (chorus)
    You think this love is pure,
    But at the end it leads to self torture,
    To bring this broken heart even further,
    Into the depths of the pit of self-destruction!

    I feel deception creeping into my spine,
    The lies that intercept and intertwine,
    About how worthless you are,
    The truth might be told,
    But your heart is to cold.


    LIFE OF A HYPOCRITE

    Our life’s purity is slipping away,
    (Evil has made our innocence die each day)
    You think you have all the knowledge of write and wrong,
    (You are backstabbing yourself when you sing a righteous song)
    This is the life of the hypocrite….
    (chorus)
    Your pushing your self into heresy,
    (this is the life of the hypocrite)
    Stop this now! Your only destroying yourself,
    (this is the life of the hypocrite)
    Cannot you see, you are taking the right poison off of the shelf,
    THIS IS THE LIFE OF A HYPOCRITE!

    Fade into the wind of anguish,
    ( the wind turns into a hurricane)
    Will this tragedy stay the same,
    ( only a miracle can help)
    Break free of this prison of pride …
    (chorus )

    HELP ME! SAVE ME! Before the end…(x2)


    SCREAM OF A SHADOW

    The Evil awaits in the shadow,
    How long can we last in this sorrow,
    (Do we stand and fight? Or do we flee in Haste?)
    Our mind is trapped in this infected place,
    It awaits….
    (chorus )
    It awaits for us to give in!
    (Into this tainted sin)
    The lies of our soul in consuming me,
    ( Into the vile sea)
    I hear the scream of shadow,
    ( It buries deep into my marrow)

    The shadow enter our lives,
    It stays until someone dies,
    ( The shadow kills us with it’s lie)
    The scream echoes in our ears,
    Until we shed tears….it awaits…



    TAINTED

    We have been dying by our greed,
    Our own pride has planted the seed,
    It will soon grow into tainted self-righteousness,
    Evil has betrayed us with an innocent kiss,
    This is the end for our misleading way,
    What is their to say….nothing besides,
    (chorus)
    We are tainted in our sin,
    We are letting the enemy in,
    We need to make right,
    And rejoin those who will fight.

    We are all scared in our prison,
    It hurts us, it makes cry,
    Why do we even try?
    I need a way out of this entrapment,
    Who will be sent….?
    (chorus)
    (bridge)
    Save me from this tainted life,
    I need to get rid of this strife !(x3)

    BROUGHT INTO THIS RUIN

    Life has been thrown down,
    Face first into the dust of the ground,
    The trumpets of destruction has sounded,
    And we are surrounded…by our enemies.
    (chorus)
    When the fear of our lives come true,
    Will we know what to ?
    Or we fall to our knees?
    And be beaten and seized ?

    The life we now share is twisted,
    And stripped bare of it’s innocence,
    As one we stand for what it is right,
    Or will be killed in the night?
    (chorus)
    STRUGGLED

    Fainted in the world as the people walk pass,
    As their faces resembles glass,
    It reflects the fears of the past,
    They will not hear it for the last time,
    Their faults being screamed from the mouths of open graves!
    We are imprisoned by our fears and we are still the slaves.
    (Chorus)
    Being pulled downed by these fears,
    (My eyes draw no tears)
    Be in the front line with time as our destruction,
    (On the battle field we will find our salvation)

    Evil will manifest our fears and it will play with our mind,
    And it will send chills down our back,
    But I will not back down!
    Because we are all bound,
    By the fear that is all around.
    (Chorus)

    Pick one that you like and PM ME A.S.P.
    THERE IS A WARRIOR THAT LIVES IN DEEP SPACE THAT PROTECTS THE COLONYS OF APHELION

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    Re: If its ok ....

    Now you rock dude you really have it in you.^^ SLiknot
    '' Death, cruelty, murder the things i have hate forever, Life is like a test with a limited time'' And doesnt have any sign''
    I wish i could help you but i make things worst, by liken you

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    Re: If its ok ....

    I thank u Suzy.... Ur most Kind
    THERE IS A WARRIOR THAT LIVES IN DEEP SPACE THAT PROTECTS THE COLONYS OF APHELION

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    Re: If its ok ....

    Some good songs just need to cover Almost Honest by Megadeth and/or Megalomaniac by KMFDM that will be optimus rock!!! But now you are at awesome rock!

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    Re: If its ok ....

    Many apologies, however it is not ok. Please keep such things to the free AO Journal we provide for you.

    -Please keep any material of a personal nature (what you ate last night, how cool your crush is, playlists, character quizzes, how much you hate your life and want to die...) in your journal. Forum is for discussion only.
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