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    Im Sorry But I dont Love You/a poem by Brent

    I Dont Love You

    The innocence is all gone,
    The relationship is over,
    This is just a mere hook up,
    Just without us being friends,

    Im sorry if I hurt you,
    But I was merly looking for a quick fling,
    I should have said that earlier,
    But the love would have faded away,

    I travel far and wide searching for him,
    I don’t know who he is I just know he is there,
    I don’t know what to expect just that I will search forever,
    Till my true love comes and rescues me,

    Untill then I will use you,
    Act like I care,
    And tell you I love you,
    While I take you slow,

    I hope that we can still be friends,
    But for now lets be lovers,
    Holding each other tightly,
    As I despise you more and more.

    I am no cheap whore,
    I will not be used,
    I am who I am,
    And nothing more.


    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    That was rather mean. :T But well, I've got no right to judge. Have fun writing future poems! You did rather well, by the way.

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    Something I love, is how you can be so mean. Because everyone writes poems about love, or sad love that didn't work out. Kudos to you for being different!

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    ..yeah...

    ...glad to know im loved..jk...yeah i rather tend to write angst and mean poetry...but someone has to..Just so all of you know im not always that mean irl..i just happen to write like it and well fell it on the inside..lol...

    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    thank you soo much, i mean i like the other stuff people write here it is really great, but i was kinda ready to slit my wrists finally something a little mean and sadistic and fun. well done, if i knew where you were i'd shake your hand.
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    ...yeah...

    tyvm once again...like when u get aim im me...and like im writing alot of poems so read a lil and when u slit ur wrists dont get blood on ur carpet..XD..jk

    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    brent it was a little mean but, good work on your peom

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    i dont really think of it as mean., i think that you showed how you truely feel and thats good not to be a fake

    my dearest brent,
    listen to your heart, not people.
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