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    Inspirated by K'heart (poem)

    Ive got some inspiration from K'heart's poems, and this is what happened

    No more love


    I see my paradise
    In your blue shining eyes
    Kissing your lips
    Lets me see my sunrise

    I see your heart
    As pure as gold
    I hide behind the lie
    As my truth unfolds

    Tell me why your gone
    Don't lie tell me the truth
    Maybe if you tell it to me
    Then i will understand you

    Your beauty, drives me insane
    I look inside, i see your heart is changed
    Its not what i see
    Its what you have done
    I know, you see the lonelyness in me

    Then again, i won't resist the pain
    Cuz i know what happened
    I'm alone again

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    cool i need insparation too very good poem
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    that is a good poem and he is a big inspiration that is where i get my poems from my guy justin which has become my life.
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    I can see the inspiration from justin in that poem. I also liked the emotion in it. nice job
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    Nikon... I feel honored that an individual like you could do something like this, even in the midst of pain. I am not only honored but amazed that you could put so much into this. Even in many of my works, have I never seen pure emotion like this. I'm no true writer, but I see talent in this. Your emotion, like mine, is what drives you. Very Nice job, and thanks for calling me an inspiration. I enjoyed that and the poem.

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    i really liked this one... good job and nice emotion..

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
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    i swear u can tell it was Justin that inspired him
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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