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    It's Good To Share

    Going on
    Day to day
    Not even knowing when you're going to die
    BAM
    Blood drips out
    Down it falls
    Till it hits your tongue
    Sensations filling your mind
    Wanting more
    So much more
    Biting at your flesh
    Reddening teeth bringing more blood
    More sensations they are bringing
    Cutting and bleeding and wanting
    Biting and swallowing and drinking
    Wishing it would never end
    Wanting it to go on forever
    But knowing you'd have to cover it up soon
    That someone would see the stains
    Of blood on your face...your mouth
    Someone see you lying here
    Feeding off of me
    Not killing me
    But people don't know the difference
    So here we are now
    Straight jacket, padded walls, and all
    Wanting the white to go away
    wanting to be surrounded by blackness again
    By the alluring darkened colors
    They think they can make me sane
    But sane i am
    Now knowing insane they are
    For if they think blood is gross
    If pain cannot be distorted
    They must be just as insane as they think i am
    Blood is incredible
    Pain is laughter that's mixed up
    I've known this for a long time now
    So i figured i'd share it with you

    ...and well that's it hope you like and do not disbelieve it thanx.
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    What's wrong with the original color of the font. I cant see the text.
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    You can read it if you highlight it.

    Hmm, it's pretty dark stuff and also abit busy. But positive points are that a good representation of 'damage'... erm, I think.

    Hmmm... He's not technically human, so it wouldn't really be like cannibalism...
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    I know that Sibby. I just dont want too. ^-^ The writer should make it easier for the reader if they want something commented on, dont ya think? Why should the reader work to read it? Lol.
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    sorry about the font colour guys...i put it in maroon to get you in the feel but i guess it wasn't too much of a good idea eh? anyways i'll edit now...also for my apologies i'll just add the rest of my poems in here(not all at first of course but whenever i get the chance or feel like it) and maybe (maybe not) you'll see one you'll like...
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    pushing and pulling
    pulling and pushing
    only to end up where you started
    foreign forces in you
    taking over everything inside
    wanting to turn away from them
    turn your back to them
    wishing they were gone
    though yu know
    it'll just come back
    forcing its way to your front
    no matter how much you keep
    pushing and pulling
    pulling and pushing
    you may be crying
    deep inside
    jumping with joy
    deep inside
    feeling nothing
    deep inside
    these foreign forces in you
    are just that much deeper
    never learning to care
    using those emotions
    forcing you
    to do things you never thought
    you'd be able to even imagine
    making you
    do things you never would do
    without these foreign forces
    pushing and pulling
    pulling and pushing
    to get these foreign forces out
    here they come again
    giving into their demands
    subsiding your used to be personality
    letting more of these foreign forces in
    now turning for help
    now needing this help
    you desperately seek out
    for a hand or more
    wanting to rid yourself
    of these foreign forces
    needing to annihilate them
    from this body that used to be held so sacred
    so here you go
    step by step
    zero to one-hundred percent
    doing anything-everything you can do
    to stop these foreign forces
    irritating yourself so much
    making you lose so much of your control
    without the help of a trusted one
    help of a loved one
    you are to live with these foreign forces
    now you scream for help
    it is needed now more than ever
    you may receive an answer
    you may never even get a whisper
    but now your life is forever changed
    no matter what path you may take

    ...funny thing is i was only talking about smoking back then

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    Not bad i like it i commend you on your marvolous work. but i do have some advice GET HAPPY you don't have to live life all depressin and morbid though it is fun any ways blood and guts is good and all (very good actually(he he he evil laugh)) but you need to be happy you know butterflys and floating dead pokemon stuff like that ( you didn't hear the thing about the dead pokemon)

    To the world you may just be one person, But to one person you may be the world.

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    mmm yes happy you say? otay then happy... happy... yes i have one or two of those hold on a sec please...

    I So Dearly Love
    To hold you hand in hand
    To be with you as long as i can
    To lie next to you in the peaceful sand
    Barely being able to say bye to you at the days end
    Because you make my life so grand
    Thinking about you all the time
    Words just flowing out of my mind
    None being able to express why you are so fine
    Knowing that i am yours and you are mine
    A query i can not find
    Without you life just wouldn't be devine
    You and those soft wonderfully brown eyes
    Who looks so beautiful like a white dove
    Whom i so dearly love...

    (i know it's been like a week since i've last posted here and it's old but i've grown attached to your [everyone] criticism.)

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