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    Journey<P>

    Follow me thru these Broken Steps.
    Life is Such a Wonderful Quest.
    But Alone it's an Endless Rest.
    Show me a Sign into your Arms.
    For only Together we will only Progress.

    -simple
    Last edited by simple; Apr 18, 2005 at 11:46 PM.

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    Nice written, its short and great, make more, it gives me inspirations on my sketches and drawings these Poems.

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    Very nice, short & sweet....it's interesting how something so short can be that touching, but it is. nice job

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    hello,

    thanks for your comments )

    Yeah when i was writing this i was trying to make it as small as possiable but as deep as a long poem so i really enjoy this work cause it really means alot to me and someone.

    so ill keep posting up more. and try to make some longer ones =o)

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    wow so much energy and it had such an impact being so small...twas great!!
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    Wow I can see how you tried to rhyme this. Simple and Sweet. :]

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    very short and simple, simple (lol)
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    rhyme, rhyme, rhyme!!!
    nice one...
    You are great...^_^

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