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    Arrow Joust

    They were off!
    Like rhinos in plates of armor they ran,
    Flailing and yelling whenever they can,
    The wind it was blowing through as a gentle breeze,
    Up through their hair and to the side of the trees.


    They were off!
    And they ran and ran,
    Flailing and screaming whenever they can,
    Glancing at their steed they hope,
    Their lances will pierce and the fear will mope.

    And still they went off!
    Then; at last! A sight of wonder!
    Horses both rear and come down in a plunder;
    One spear sails, true and far, the other whistles into the throng.
    The victor's bell rings with an earsplitting bong!
    One will leave; the other to stay,
    To do the same in a following day....

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    Its great, wel done.

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    thanks .... i think it's ok but i also think i have done better lol ....

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    great poem dude. lol

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    nice work there dude

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    ^ ^ glad u liked

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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