Karma/A poem by Brent

Karma

According to karma
What goes around comes back
Well to karma I got to say
that’s never happened to me!

I’ve live a horrible life
I always carry a knife!
Just in case things get better
I can make sure my skin bleeds like leather

I’m alone in this world
With no one to talk to
They say that I need help
Well I say all of u do

Ur all lovy dovy
Spending time making out
But do u idiots even know
What pain is about?!?!

A few more years ill be in prison
For speaking my true mind
If that’s what this world is coming to
Then here is my wrist to bind

I’d rather rot away
Then live to see the day
That this world comes crashing down
And people panic all around!!!!!!

damn right, go you, i like you, your different, but you seem a little caught up with ryhming, mabye you should have the ryhming but suddenly break it with a nice harsh word put in,mabye at the end.

...yeah...

TYVM i love it when someone agrees with me..and with the ryming thing i usually do free verse but then sometimes i accidentally add in ryhms but ill work on that...

:lurk: Brent

brent you have to be in a book of poetry

awsome
*cant read the font perfectly..but still good*