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    Karma/A poem by Brent

    Karma

    According to karma
    What goes around comes back
    Well to karma I got to say
    that’s never happened to me!

    I’ve live a horrible life
    I always carry a knife!
    Just in case things get better
    I can make sure my skin bleeds like leather

    I’m alone in this world
    With no one to talk to
    They say that I need help
    Well I say all of u do

    Ur all lovy dovy
    Spending time making out
    But do u idiots even know
    What pain is about?!?!

    A few more years ill be in prison
    For speaking my true mind
    If that’s what this world is coming to
    Then here is my wrist to bind

    I’d rather rot away
    Then live to see the day
    That this world comes crashing down
    And people panic all around!!!!!!
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    damn right, go you, i like you, your different, but you seem a little caught up with ryhming, mabye you should have the ryhming but suddenly break it with a nice harsh word put in,mabye at the end.
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    ...yeah...

    TYVM i love it when someone agrees with me..and with the ryming thing i usually do free verse but then sometimes i accidentally add in ryhms but ill work on that...

    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    brent you have to be in a book of poetry

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    awsome
    *cant read the font perfectly..but still good*
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