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    Key To My Black Heart/a poem by Brent

    Key to My Black Heart

    I love my friend,
    I don’t know if he loves me
    I think that he has no idea,
    Of what I go through,

    I see him every day at school,
    Talk to him on the phone,
    Write him notes at night,
    And carve his name in stone,

    I don’t know why I try,
    I guess im just in love with him,

    He doesn’t seem to notice,
    How Hard I try,
    He doesn’t notice that I just want to die,
    But he is keeping me going,

    I have only one thing to do,
    I shall free him from this world,
    And leave soon after,
    If he is keeping me then he can set me free,
    He is the key to my heart and my undoing,
    But I still love him.

    PS @dark Raver tyvm for ur support and ull like bloody wedding also which is somewhere in this poem forum near the end i imagin

    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    No offense or anything but have you ever asked him how he feels about you. Damn I should be asking myself that because I was in the same situation as you .well switch genders and yah its the same.I am sad to say it is to late for me and I will never see her again. Don't be afraid of the answer because a no is better than never knowing. I don't know, you may feel differently about it then me.
    This pain is sratching at my bone.
    And this Loneliness won't leave me alone.

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    ...yeah...

    ummm..lol..well the thing is this never happened to me..well it did but it was like 2 years ago..but ty for the advice...I was love sick and i didnt even know him that well i wasnt angry but this is just for poeple in all differnt perspectives..wait not that im saying go kill people if they dont love u...lol..i just like to write about diff situations..excuse my grammar mistake plz..

    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    brent that was a kool peom

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