well.. the prologue... hope it was good, waiting for comments
In the beginning, a battle for supremacy between the LIGHT and SHADOW took place in the world called "ATLON". The battle was so fierce, that the world came to its utter end. The Gods, who creat both LIGHT and SHADOW, had enough and decided to wield a sword that would balance both clans and bring peace to the world. The Gods used the sword to drain the strength and power of both clans, thus the war was stopped. A few years later, people from both clans start to feel uneasy living in the peaceful world of Atlon. Some members of the clan started committing suicide, to feel the pain and death. Thus the both clans decided to hide and sleep in the ends of the world until the sword would be broken, and once again bring war to the world.
Many years have passed, Atlon was left desolated, not a living soul was in sight, the Gods was discontented about their world, and so they created a living soul called "HUMAN". Millions of years passed, the human knowledge progressed, and the humans learned to rebel against the Gods and declared war. The Gods was so enrage from the rebellion that they used the powers of both Light and Shadow to battle against the humans. Once again the world of Atlon was at war, the fierce battle took many years, as both parties was equal in power and strength, until the humans took the advantage when they stole the sword that was used by the Gods to seal the Light and Shadow clan. Using their knowledge and the abilities of the sword, the humans defeated the Gods. The Gods was then banished through the depths of hell. The war ended, but then the human ego was still in their very soul... thus the humans began a new war, on who will be the owner of the sword.
The humans was split into four clans; the clan of Trobazol which resided in the west, the Togarez clan which resided in the east, the clan of Gubet which resided in the south and the clan of Voratz which resided in the north and in the middle, was the sword that defeated the Gods, the humans called it "Soul Sword". The clan wars was then in play, as everyone battles for the ownership of the Soul Sword. After years of fierce war, the Soul Sword vanished into the midst of it all; the war was stopped. After the sword's disappearance, the four clans had a peace treaty, and decided to create a place where the humans can coexist. The peace reigned on the world of Atlon, other people from the clans hid to their respective place, and humans who live in the new country try to coexist.
500 years later, the humans who reside on the middle of the world forgot about the clans and the wars. Technology progressed, buildings, cars, and different humans technologies were created as a new civilization was in the making. But in the middle of it all, a new war is about to begin...
well.. the prologue... hope it was good, waiting for comments
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~Chapter 1~ (Part 1)
The Beginning of a New War
In a dark fiery night at the top of Saint Avalon, a girl with long black hair is standing at the peak of the mountain.
“I’ve finally arrived at my destination…” the girl muttered.
Suddenly, loud screams echoed through the air, as a group of reptiles was seen making there way through the forest of Saint Avalon. The girl observed the reptiles heading to the nearby town, down by the mountain.
“They’ve finally arrived as well…” said the girl.
Meanwhile, in the town below the mountain, Veris, 2nd year college student Shime Akatsu just got home from school.
“Average day again, such a boring town… I sure hope something exciting could happen.” Shime took out his calendar and schedules from his bag and sat down on the couch.
“Woah, few more days and I guess it’s my birthday.”
A loud knock was then heard in front of Shime’s apartment “Just a minute” said Shime. Shime stood up, but then accidentally dropped his calendar and schedules. The knock kept getting louder as it continues, while Shime was picking up his schedules.
“Just a minute, geez… this person is sure in a hurry.” As Shime was about to answer the door, the phone started ringing violently, “What the heck!” Shime then slowly comes closer to the phone, and answered it.
“Is this Shime Akatsu”
“Shime, whatever you do, DO NOT answer the door. –“
The phone line was then cut, as the knock on the door keeps getting louder and louder, Shime runs to the kitchen and picks up a knife. Shime then walks slowly to the front door, as the knock keeps getting louder and louder, as if it was about to knock the door down. The loud knock stopped as Shime held the doorknob. Shime opened the door slowly, but no one was there, he went out to look around and he didn’t see anyone.
“What is this… some kind of prank?” as Shime sighed in relief.
As Shime was about to go back to his apartment, eight Reptiles came crashing in his window apartment, Shime was shock. Fortunately the human lizards didn’t notice Shime yet, so he hid to the corner and observed what they were going to do.
“Wh-What are they…?” said Shime with terror.
The reptiles’ starts trashing Shime’s place, Shime observes at everything terrifyingly and then suddenly one of the reptiles saw Shime, and gave out a loud scream; Shime was surprised and fell down on his back. The reptiles ran to Shime’s direction, Shime stood up and started to run as fast as he can, but the reptiles caught up with Shime and surrounded him. The reptiles stared at Shime like he was a meal for dinner; Shime, who was so terrified, just fell down on his knees. One of the reptiles moved forward and attacked Shime, but suddenly the girl with the long black hair appeared of nowhere and gave the attacking reptile a hard kick in the chest, causing the reptile to fly to his companions. Shime glanced at her and the girl said to Shime “Do not worry, I’ll take care of them…”
~Chapter 1~ (Part 2)
“Wh-What are they?!?” said Shime shivering.
“They are created by the seeds of a magician from the clan of Togarez… this reptiles are here to kill you.”
“What? What did I do them?”
“They think you are the bearer of the mythical soul sword, and they believe that they will have possession of the sword once they kill you.”
“Soul sword? What is that?”
“I will explain later, please stay close, they are about to attack.”
Shime stood up and stood close to the girl. The reptiles moved in slowly to Shime and the girl, but the girl didn’t take any chance and took the initiative, attacking the first two reptiles from the front. The girl gave the reptile a spinning kick on the head, followed by a summersault from the other reptile. She noticed two reptiles heading for Shime, the girl then picked up a piece of rock and threw it to the reptiles, hitting both reptiles in the eyes. The girl ran to Shime’s direction, and gave the reptiles a heavy drop kick. The girl gets back to her original position and said “No one will lay a hand at the bearer!”
Suddenly, a guy with the dragon armor and a guy with a scar on his face show up on the roof of Shime’s apartment.
“Very good… you’re skills… they’re incomparable, you clearly are the infamous Kirei of Trobazol” said the guy with the dragon armor.
“And you are…” asked by Kirei.
“My apologies… I am Ganther, leader of the assassin group called Flock 7, and as you guess… I am also a member of the Togarez clan.”
The guy with the scar on his face came out of the shadows.
“Delgado…” said Kirei.
Delgado jumped off at the roof and walked over to Kirei and Shime’s direction.
“Kirei… give up the bearer… and I swear, we will not harm you, or your clan”
“If you think I’m that easy Delgado… then think again… this bearer is under my protection, and no one, not even YOU will lay a hand on him.”
“I was hoping you won’t give up…” Delgado took out some seeds from his pocket and dropped it on the ground.
Eight more reptiles came out from the ground.
“I will… get my revenge… Kirei!”
All the reptiles that are on the field attacked at once, Kirei, grabbed Shime and evaded all the reptiles, as both ran off.