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    The Kiss (poem)

    i want to kiss you...
    but it's only my imagination...
    still no matter,
    i can somehow feel you.
    you lie next to me,
    and hold me tightly.
    "i care for you..."
    that's what you said before.
    "but i can't love you..."
    and she holds me tighter,
    and leans in to me.
    "Why do you care for me",
    this I hear from her lips.
    "Because your the only one,
    who could have ever cared for me."
    I lean and kiss her,
    she's stunned for a moment,
    but melts into it,
    the sheets are gone from the bed,
    and cannot be felt by us anymore.
    it's as if we become one,
    like i could have only dreamed,
    feeling only her lips on mine.
    i don't notice my hands,
    as they hold her tightly.
    i feel her grasping myself,
    but only a moment,
    and it passes.
    it's as if the only feeling i have,
    is her lips against mine.
    floating in space with her,
    our lips locked in the passion,
    of the first time ourselves like this.
    Almost as if,
    neither me nor her,
    have ever kissed before.
    we both stall and then part lips.
    i'm back alone in my room,
    wishing next time would be real.....



    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Otaku TakuHonji may be famous one day TakuHonji may be famous one day TakuHonji's Avatar
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    Nice poem man.

    Ones life is too short to move like a mortal
    Live by the sword
    Die by the sword
    Stay in the shadows

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    wow..you made me all blushy..not many things can do that. keep writing!
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    ..i enjoyed reading it, keep on writing, you'l make it some day,
    if destiny agrees with you..

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    Wow! Your poems are always so good! jealous much!

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