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    Otaku Wrath may be famous one day Wrath may be famous one day Wrath's Avatar
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    The Kiss[Short Poem]

    I hoped that he would love me,
    And he has kissed my mouth,
    But I am like a stricken bird
    That cannot reach the South.

    For though I know he loves me,
    Tonight my heart is sad;
    His kiss was not as wonderful
    As all the dreams I had...
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    It's nice, but a little short.

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    Newbie Mrs.Sesshomaru may be famous one day Mrs.Sesshomaru may be famous one day
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    nice...u should also try free verse..but i liked it...short and yet it stated the true meaning of the poem

    Brent

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    Otaku Wrath may be famous one day Wrath may be famous one day Wrath's Avatar
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    Thanks! I appreciate it!
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    kool poem and keep up

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    Ummm thanks, are you trying to piost alot or something??
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    hey wrath where do you get that inspiration for your poems, they rock!!!!

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