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    Knight in Shining Armor/A poem By Brent

    Knight in Shining Armor

    I waited for you in my time of need,
    You came by in your shining armor looking to do a good dead,
    I was your tall black steed,
    But when I went lame in my time of need,
    You left me in the dark,

    So let me be your damsel in distress,
    For your stupid friends to impress,
    So you may move onto better things,
    While I rot here forever,
    Seeing you laugh at me,


    You are the king I am merely your pawn,
    Waiting on you hand and foot till the break of dawn,
    For when dawn comes I shall be needed no more,
    Used and used by you like a cheep 5 dollar whore,


    I am exscaliver you are my knight,
    I am a tool for you nothing more,


    So I bid you farewell as I sink into my stone,
    To sleep till I am called upon when my next love arrives,
    To be in his arms till I am once again despised.

    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    Did you mean deed, instead of dead?

    Anyways, I think you have poem writting talent.

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    ...yeah...

    Yes i did mean deed..im soory plz excuse my grammar..i try

    and tyvm it means alot to me to know that people think i have talent..and poetry is my life

    Brent
    I am the one you all despise,
    I am The One hated by all,
    I am simply me.


    Brent

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    so you mean dead and good work on your poem!!!^_^!!!

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    kool poem dude!!!! keep it up maybe you'll become the next shakespear!!lol

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