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    last night(p)

    Light Opens my Eyes.
    Death Enters my Mind.
    Bones seem to break.
    Blood stops flowing.
    Memory's begin to Fade.
    Nightmare's Rise to Fame.

    -simple

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    I guess you like to keep your poems simple like now. Well done with this one.

    You really live up to your name.

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    good job it painted some very vivic pictures in my mind...and it was small but had enugh detail to get the piont through...good job
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    I guess your poem's the same as your nick- Simple. :] And of course, it was good.

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    nice work good job

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    Oh yes, i like the short ones, i really do, great job.

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