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    *Lets get off this path*

    Somebody come to me
    From far far away
    Take me from my feet
    Lets dance today
    A dream I dream
    A place that won't be
    For a fantasy is all it could ever be...

    Somebody come for me
    From far far away
    To take my hand and hold me
    To rescue me from the cold
    So I don't have to be lonely
    So I don't have to walk alone


    Somebody come to me
    From far far away
    To take me from these streets
    And hurtful bloody ways
    For a dream is what I dream
    When I sleep tonight and today

    Somebody come for me
    From far far away
    Prove to me that you care
    And that you will be there
    Rescue me from this sadness
    From o' heavens despair

    I dream far
    I dream wide
    I wish for alot of things
    On the seas tides
    I am in bliss
    In this reality that doesn't
    Exist

    Somebody come for me
    From far far away
    To prove to me that you aren't a dream
    That you'll stay
    For I am a dreamer
    And this is my wish
    Though nothing of that sort will ever be
    Accomplished

    Somebody come for me
    From far far away
    To slide me away from
    This eternal night death
    Somebody O somebody
    Save me from this hell
    Let me be guided
    Like a hammer to a nail

    Somebody come for me
    From far far away
    To show me the worlds not dark
    And there's still hope lost
    Within the night sky of the cold
    Forsakened heart

    I hear a blood drop
    I see the knife cut the skin
    I smell the rust of the nails
    Bashing into you
    I can see the hatred fully
    The color of red aura
    And I wish that somebody could come save me
    So I could guide you too
    To a place we call a heaven
    In this human world...

    Somebody come for me
    From far far away
    Take that flight on
    Your gold and black wings
    For there's still hope left
    In this lonely world


    Somebody O somebody
    Come rescue me from
    This cold foresakened path
    Come give me the dream
    That I dream as a dreamer
    Lets get off this path...
    Lets get off this path
    Lets get off this
    God forsakened
    Path...

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    Ahhh this poem was lovely, I wish I could hear somebody sing it. It's great, keep up with the good writing. I'm saving this to my hard drive

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tomato
    Ahhh this poem was lovely, I wish I could hear somebody sing it. It's great, keep up with the good writing. I'm saving this to my hard drive
    So very lenghty but i like it too...hmm...would go well with someone with a soft voice if u ask me..nicely done

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    I love it. Very nice. Very touching.

    AWSOME!!!

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    Awesome poem, prehaps more of a song than a poem though ^^,
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