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im not sure
where I am
I can see you
But cant touch you
Everything is surreal
I cant feel anything
Whats wrong here
Whats wrong with me?
I don’t understand
I start to sweat
I cant breathe
I try to scream
But youre running from me
And cant here me
I hear your vioce tellin gme im ok
But I know im not
My heart stops-
I wake up-
Im lost
-lost in a dream
more like a nightmare. I've actually felt that before. Strong stuff, good job. Nice wording, and I like the whole dream thing. That's how I got started. Can't wait to read your next one!
eerie and finely written. Everyones felt like this at one point, very good job here.
The description of the dream is sso good, nice work keep the dreaming alive:D
Yea... very eerie. Sorta like my dreams. Nice job!
thank u all for your replies... this was one of those poems that just came to me ....i guess you could say in a daydream
nice job!!!
was thta a nightmare, cause it was like it?!!!
keep up the nice poems of yours...
i liked alot, kind eerie and in places depressing, but thats a good thing, fantastic