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    lost in a dream{P}

    im not sure
    where I am
    I can see you
    But cant touch you
    Everything is surreal
    I cant feel anything
    Whats wrong here
    Whats wrong with me?
    I don’t understand
    I start to sweat
    I cant breathe
    I try to scream
    But youre running from me
    And cant here me
    I hear your vioce tellin gme im ok
    But I know im not
    My heart stops-
    I wake up-
    Im lost
    -lost in a dream
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    more like a nightmare. I've actually felt that before. Strong stuff, good job. Nice wording, and I like the whole dream thing. That's how I got started. Can't wait to read your next one!

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    eerie and finely written. Everyones felt like this at one point, very good job here.

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    The description of the dream is sso good, nice work keep the dreaming alive

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    Yea... very eerie. Sorta like my dreams. Nice job!
    Last edited by T Elocin; Apr 19, 2005 at 02:10 PM.

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    thank u all for your replies... this was one of those poems that just came to me ....i guess you could say in a daydream
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    nice job!!!
    was thta a nightmare, cause it was like it?!!!
    keep up the nice poems of yours...

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    i liked alot, kind eerie and in places depressing, but thats a good thing, fantastic
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