Love

Joyival as I may seem, a lonely path I walk down.
An angel I await, whose salvation is also my love.

The sunrise is her beauty and
her eyes are like the stars of night.
Her skin is silk and her voice is like a song.
An orchard of flowers bloom like our
love but stand still against time.

Night settles but the youth in us keeps us
awake and every minute together is percious.
Even in death, our love carry on into the next life.

This is a short poem I just came up with while I was bored in class. So if it's not to standard with the other poems before mine. I never did give this poem a title, so that's the best I can do for now. I apologise.

You don't need to apologize. I am really impressed. You can make such an amazing poem while being bored in class. I know I couldn't do it. Keep up the awesome work!:2thumbs:

that poem is now one of my favs. you are really good

Those men who show feelings are unafraid to show who they are,
Bold but Sweet, the new men have entered the stage of society,
And Evolution continues to show true works of art and feelings,

You have made a good poem, look deep into yourself and bring out the feelings to be able to bring out works of art. :)

lol man that was a nice poem.

Thx to all to said this was good so far. Anyway, I got a story blog on http://www.freewebs.com/samurai-of-the-moon/

Tell me wut u guys think of it.

that was a nice poem good job :thumb:

gtg now adios amigos................