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    ??* Judge and Executioner ??* White Van Man Champion, Home Run Derby Champion, Mahjongg sport Champion, Jewel Champion, The Asteroids Champion koga23 may be famous one day koga23 may be famous one day koga23's Avatar
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    This is the best poem I have read because it came from you heart 10 out of 10
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    newbies *sigh*
    neuroport- FREEFORM poetry isnt suppose to rhyme unless you want small parts to like the ends like

    i ran down a hill
    saw a green bush
    just the bush and me
    frankly you can see
    im lonely

    hill and bush dont rhyme but me see and lonely do......wow you learned something today............neebies ....i swear......*sigh*


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    lupusyonderboy-YES IT IS POETRY!! its called freeform...look it up or look at my other post on the poem you posted on.....many ppl use freeform poetry here so get use to it!!

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    neuroport- FREEFORM poetry isnt suppose to rhyme unless you want small parts to like the ends like
    You hate me.

    I said it had no rhythm, not that it didn't rhyme.
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    Newbie Lupus Yonderboy may be famous one day Lupus Yonderboy may be famous one day
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    Ok.

    Your freeform poetry sucks. It has no flow, no depth, no clever wordplay and could have written by any damn asshole with a pen in his hand.

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    hey animechick can you teach me poetry!!!

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    anytime bae, ive studied the history along with types and forms...so i know my stuff....lol... you dont need work babe, you have your own awesome style!!

    oh and nuero...... aparently if ppl like it it doesnt have to have YOUR definition of rythym...kepp your posts to your self as far as im conceren with my work unless you have constructive critcism or encouragement...were friends hewr at AO ...we try not to make enimies..and i only hate one person...and its not you
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    Quote Originally Posted by animechick
    oh and nuero...... aparently if ppl like it it doesnt have to have YOUR definition of rythym...kepp your posts to your self as far as im conceren with my work unless you have constructive critcism or encouragement...were friends hewr at AO ...we try not to make enimies..and i only hate one person...and its not you
    My definition of rhythm is quite loose. You'll notice I have rather poor rhythm myself, but you have none whatsoever.

    I think you should learn what constructive criticism is.
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