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    cc is saying this part is good or the base is good but this needs work as i put on your....i dont degrade ppl...you shouldnt either...but do as you please...

    and i dont care what you think...ppl here like my works and thats all that matters...even if only ONE person does encourages me
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    Constrictive criticism is telling you what to do to make it better.

    You need rhythm.

    And if you're going to honour me through your sig, at least spell my handle correctly.
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    if it will make you shut up ill change it...later...fell free to add anyones sn to your sig

    cc must have SOMETHING contructive or it wouldnt be called constructive criticism now would it?
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    I think she needs to learn three things.

    1. She needs to learn how to apply proper grammar and puncuation to all forms of writing, may it be a forum post of just some sort of literary doodle.

    2. Modify her "poetry" style to allow groove, innovation and originality- making it possible for her to avoid cliches, even if it means losing theme entirely.

    3. Learn from others. She probably didn't even read Dance Dance. She just wanted to attack my writing, probably.
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    No, it doesn't. It's critique to help you benefit or improve. If there's nothing good about the poem, I can't say anything was good about it.
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    damn why are you even here i dont wanna here crap keep it to yourself or go bitch about it to lupus...hes just like ya....please dont post on the threads i start...i dont wanna here your bs

    and lupus i did read your w/e the hell you call it and it sucked but i at least tried to find good in it same for you please dont post on the threads i start
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    I think I'll post where I want, thanks.
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    didnt tell you not to i asked politely....do as you please until/unless you get banned
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