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    Otaku Kiri79 may be famous one day Kiri79 may be famous one day Kiri79's Avatar
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    Love Until

    Everytime I look into your eyes
    They almost wanna make me cry
    I don't know why, but I have to let you go
    My mind is saying yes, while my heart is saying no

    Ever since that unfaithful night
    I've always held on to my pillow tight
    We have formed a knot they never can sever
    But as I have now learned, love cannot last forever

    Its as if God is making me do something against my will
    But I will always wait for that day until
    I will be in your warming arms yet again,
    As your lover, and as your friend.

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    Banned Kikinaki may be famous one day Kikinaki may be famous one day Kikinaki's Avatar
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    Aaaahhh this is sweet! I really enjoyed reading it. Short and simple, like many poems here and well i can only say more that this was a very sweet poem. Thanks Kiri79

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    Yeah, nice poem.

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    Ooh, this really touches my heart. I love it.

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