Love You More

Shade/K' Heart · May 14, 2005, 07:26 PM

The more I know,
The more I want to know.
The more love you show,
The more I love you.
The more you do for me,
The more I do for you.
I gave my all,
And you give just as much.
I’ve never known that such a thing,
Could be true.
I love you,
When you smile.
I love you when you stare at me.
I love when you speak now,
That your computer caught your voice,
And sent it to me.
I love the softness of your being.
All of you,
That’s what I love.
I’ll give to you,
The dreams that you hold inside,
Because some of them are my dreams too.
Why are you so amazed by me,
When I give you my all.
Has there never been another,
That has portrayed love like this?
Cause I’d give you the world,
If I owned it,
My Rose Petal.
If I had the chance,
I’d marry you,
And give you all that you desire.
Right now, things don’t look good,
But with you here,
I have all I need.
Thank you love,
For everything.

To My Rose Petal, Amandra Berogan

By : Justin McCormick (K‘ Heart)

!lord nikon · May 15, 2005, 12:51 AM

Nice poem, its really good

*esthered* · May 15, 2005, 02:03 AM

haha. wonderful. just wonderful.

RavenMoon13 · May 15, 2005, 04:26 AM

great one nice job...

*ketaro* · May 15, 2005, 08:15 AM

great poem dude, keep it up lol

PS; where do you get that inspiration man. lol

*dark frog* · May 15, 2005, 09:31 AM

i love you more then the world and no there has been no other

Amandra Lynn Berogan ( Rose Petal)

*kenshi2885* · May 16, 2005, 06:25 PM

this is deep very touching nice work

A'Karuya · May 17, 2005, 07:25 AM

It was good and deep.

Oh and Justin why don't you just say that you are in Amboy

*N.Y._Soulja* · Jun 03, 2005, 04:13 PM

well Justin, thses struggles u r both going through, will come out to be somthin good. Trust me God can see the struggle u r both goin through, it wil all work ou t in the end

May 14, 2005, 07:26 PM	#1 (permalink)
Shade/K' Heart Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: I am always near... Posts: 411 Thanks: 10 Thanked 8 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,107	Love You More The more I know, The more I want to know. The more love you show, The more I love you. The more you do for me, The more I do for you. I gave my all, And you give just as much. I’ve never known that such a thing, Could be true. I love you, When you smile. I love you when you stare at me. I love when you speak now, That your computer caught your voice, And sent it to me. I love the softness of your being. All of you, That’s what I love. I’ll give to you, The dreams that you hold inside, Because some of them are my dreams too. Why are you so amazed by me, When I give you my all. Has there never been another, That has portrayed love like this? Cause I’d give you the world, If I owned it, My Rose Petal. If I had the chance, I’d marry you, And give you all that you desire. Right now, things don’t look good, But with you here, I have all I need. Thank you love, For everything. To My Rose Petal, Amandra Berogan By : Justin McCormick (K‘ Heart) __________________ Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
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May 15, 2005, 12:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
!lord nikon Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: NOWHERE Posts: 1,229 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -200	Nice poem, its really good
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May 15, 2005, 02:03 AM	#3 (permalink)
esthered Alucard's Lover Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Perth Posts: 352 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	haha. wonderful. just wonderful. __________________
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May 15, 2005, 04:26 AM	#4 (permalink)
RavenMoon13 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: fl Posts: 48 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	great one nice job... __________________ "Dim vales- and shadowy floods- And cloudy-looking woods, Whose forms we can't discover For the tears that drip all over! Huge moons there wax and wane- Again- again- again-" Edgar Allan Poe
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ketaro kitty Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,221 Thanks: 27 Thanked 31 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 23,200	great poem dude, keep it up lol PS; where do you get that inspiration man. lol
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May 15, 2005, 09:31 AM	#6 (permalink)
dark frog AO Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amboy,Illinois Posts: 100 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	i love you more then the world and no there has been no other Amandra Lynn Berogan ( Rose Petal) __________________ LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.
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kenshi2885 AO Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Inside the physical body Posts: 219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	this is deep very touching nice work
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May 17, 2005, 07:25 AM	#8 (permalink)
A'Karuya Newbie Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: here Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	It was good and deep. Oh and Justin why don't you just say that you are in Amboy __________________ LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy A'Karuya (the young warrior)
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Jun 03, 2005, 04:13 PM	#9 (permalink)
N.Y._Soulja ¥_Gankutsuou_¥ Join Date: May 2005 Location: ¿Geez, where the hell am I? Posts: 600 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 326	well Justin, thses struggles u r both going through, will come out to be somthin good. Trust me God can see the struggle u r both goin through, it wil all work ou t in the end __________________ Death Is Certain; Its Hour Uncertain There Is No Need For Redemption
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