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    Love You More

    The more I know,
    The more I want to know.
    The more love you show,
    The more I love you.
    The more you do for me,
    The more I do for you.
    I gave my all,
    And you give just as much.
    I’ve never known that such a thing,
    Could be true.
    I love you,
    When you smile.
    I love you when you stare at me.
    I love when you speak now,
    That your computer caught your voice,
    And sent it to me.
    I love the softness of your being.
    All of you,
    That’s what I love.
    I’ll give to you,
    The dreams that you hold inside,
    Because some of them are my dreams too.
    Why are you so amazed by me,
    When I give you my all.
    Has there never been another,
    That has portrayed love like this?
    Cause I’d give you the world,
    If I owned it,
    My Rose Petal.
    If I had the chance,
    I’d marry you,
    And give you all that you desire.
    Right now, things don’t look good,
    But with you here,
    I have all I need.
    Thank you love,
    For everything.

    To My Rose Petal, Amandra Berogan

    By : Justin McCormick (K‘ Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Nice poem, its really good

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    haha. wonderful. just wonderful.

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    great one nice job...

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    great poem dude, keep it up lol

    PS; where do you get that inspiration man. lol

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    i love you more then the world and no there has been no other


    Amandra Lynn Berogan ( Rose Petal)
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    this is deep very touching nice work

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    It was good and deep.

    Oh and Justin why don't you just say that you are in Amboy
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

    A'Karuya (the young warrior)

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