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    Lyrics, or poem, whatever

    ok so.. heres some lyrics im working on.


    This life is some hopeless
    a story filled with blunder
    everythings clashed,
    like gods rolling thunder.

    I look to the skies,
    as a holy curse rains,
    drowning these cries,
    in drenching pain.

    i let my soul bleed,
    and cryout to thy lord,
    to forgive this greed,
    and fight lucifers horde.

    push them back,
    a sword of light,
    the gates of hell crack,
    as the angels fight.

    ok well, thats it. hope its not to embarrasing >.<
    Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23

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    That was beautiful. the poem flowed just right. Nothing seemed forced. I would actually like to read some free verse poems from you. I feel you have great talent.
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