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  1. May 07, 2005 03:22 AM #1
    Gin Nightingale
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    Memories

    Memories
    May 6, 2005
    by: Silver Nightingale
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    The delicate scent
    Cherry blossoms waft through air
    Bring me back to spring


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    "Even the tiniest of things could remind us of our fondest memories..."
    Last edited by Gin Nightingale; May 11, 2005 at 09:23 PM. Reason: I changed the second line to fit the 5-7-5 syllabic rhythm. Thanks for pointing that one out.
  2. May 07, 2005 03:27 AM #2
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    Wow, this is really different, it's great i love it.
  3. May 07, 2005 04:21 AM #3
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    Makes me wonder now about something. Guess you have good memories in your life and you've written one of them short and simple, nicely done.
    Last edited by Kikinaki; May 07, 2005 at 09:34 AM.
  4. May 07, 2005 07:21 AM #4
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    Small but creative. Do more. I lab it.
  5. May 07, 2005 07:52 AM #5
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    I love this thing but...
    is this meant to be a haiku, if so, it is one silble too long, tough break.
    Ace thing tho
  6. May 07, 2005 08:27 AM #6
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    Simple and effective. Greatly done Gin.
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