May 6, 2005
by: Silver Nightingale
The delicate scent
Cherry blossoms waft through air
Bring me back to spring
"Even the tiniest of things could remind us of our fondest memories..."
Last edited by Gin Nightingale; May 11, 2005 at 09:23 PM.
Reason: I changed the second line to fit the 5-7-5 syllabic rhythm. Thanks for pointing that one out.
Wow, this is really different, it's great i love it.
Makes me wonder now about something. Guess you have good memories in your life and you've written one of them short and simple, nicely done.
Last edited by Kikinaki; May 07, 2005 at 09:34 AM.
Small but creative. Do more. I lab it.
I love this thing but...
is this meant to be a haiku, if so, it is one silble too long, tough break.
Ace thing tho
Simple and effective. Greatly done Gin.