Memories

*Gin Nightingale* · May 07, 2005, 03:22 AM

Memories
May 6, 2005
by: Silver Nightingale
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The delicate scent
Cherry blossoms waft through air
Bring me back to spring

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"Even the tiniest of things could remind us of our fondest memories..."

!lord nikon · May 07, 2005, 03:27 AM

Wow, this is really different, it's great i love it.

!Kikinaki · May 07, 2005, 04:21 AM

Makes me wonder now about something. Guess you have good memories in your life and you've written one of them short and simple, nicely done.

*deidre_the_goddess* · May 07, 2005, 07:21 AM

Small but creative. Do more. I lab it.

Sherlock Hound · May 07, 2005, 07:52 AM

I love this thing but...
is this meant to be a haiku, if so, it is one silble too long, tough break.
Ace thing tho

*narrator* · May 07, 2005, 08:27 AM

Simple and effective. Greatly done Gin.

May 07, 2005, 03:22 AM	#1 (permalink)
Gin Nightingale The Siggeh Maker Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality Posts: 344 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Memories Memories May 6, 2005 by: Silver Nightingale --- The delicate scent Cherry blossoms waft through air Bring me back to spring --- "Even the tiniest of things could remind us of our fondest memories..." __________________ I close my eyes, wishing you were by my side But that is just wistful thinking... Last edited by Gin Nightingale; May 11, 2005 at 09:23 PM. Reason: I changed the second line to fit the 5-7-5 syllabic rhythm. Thanks for pointing that one out.
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May 07, 2005, 03:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
!lord nikon Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: NOWHERE Posts: 1,229 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -200	Wow, this is really different, it's great i love it.
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May 07, 2005, 04:21 AM	#3 (permalink)
!Kikinaki Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 246 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -200	Makes me wonder now about something. Guess you have good memories in your life and you've written one of them short and simple, nicely done. Last edited by Kikinaki; May 07, 2005 at 09:34 AM.
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deidre_the_goddess AO Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: i came from a place no one has ever gone.. Posts: 306 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 540	Small but creative. Do more. I lab it.
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May 07, 2005, 07:52 AM	#5 (permalink)
Sherlock Hound Newbie Join Date: May 2005 Location: The Local Blockbusters Rental Shop Posts: 51 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	I love this thing but... is this meant to be a haiku, if so, it is one silble too long, tough break. Ace thing tho __________________
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May 07, 2005, 08:27 AM	#6 (permalink)
narrator Self Banned and Loving it Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Check the cellar.... Posts: 1,990 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 151	Simple and effective. Greatly done Gin. __________________
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