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    Unhappy Mirror

    The mirror... the sick strange mirror. Cruel obscene mirrors.....

    The mirror is a portal, from reality, leads to falsehood.
    The difference between the two is fine, but present.
    The mirror holds my eyes, full of since past sorrow; pain.
    The death of dearest loved one, never found; forever lost to barren seas of glass!



    The mirror holds all profanities; all is black and white.
    One is either live or dead,
    Yet somehow I have been found in the middle.
    In midst of it all.......


    The vast army of stress and hate has drowned my soul....
    Stoned my soul....
    Captured my soul! ..
    Has put my soul in shackles!...
    Sold my soul!
    Has KILLED my soul!......
    And all is lost in the mirrors.......Never found; forever lost to barren seas of glass...






    i hope u guys like this one, the death of a loved one is my horse, Starlady, and i know some of you are thinking "oh, it's just a horse..." but not to me... we had the best of times and she was a true friend... I lost her just a couple of weeks ago, three at the most... so this is my tribute to her death and the confusion and doubt that followed....



    to a friend lost too soon;
    a sister never to be known;
    a hero in my heart;
    always to be lost and forgotten by everyone;
    except me.....

    ......It was too soon Starlady......
    Last edited by RavenMoon13; May 16, 2005 at 07:42 PM.

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    WOW, this is good, wel done, i really like it.

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    thanks so much, glad you liked it... it was late last night and i just started feeling like that... so i wrote it down... tadaa... lol thanks for the comment

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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