A lonely heart, longing to be reunited, hate that dam feeling. great poem, hmm you could give her a copy, a lil risky though, or you could recite it to her in person,
Well, she doesn't seem to want to even look at me right now. If I walked up to give her a copy, or started to read it to her, she would just walk off. So, no, I won't try either. If she wants to, she can read it on here. If not, then that's her choice.
awww, I'm so sorry for you. I hope you start feeling better soon. anyway, i like the poem. You should try hanging out with your friends to cheer you up; it always helps me. A little company never hurts. And ummm, well, I like your sad poems. They're very full of emotion. good job.
i will never forgive you
i liked this one too, its so emo
it twas great ...you kept the piont of it in line while ryming in a great scheme ....power to ya!!