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    Moonlit Path (poem)

    When the moon shines full
    I'll take a stroll
    Along this path.
    At last.
    The forgotten path of my past
    Every twist, swirl, and turn
    I get more lost with every curve
    My actions seeming more absurd
    Within this day I turn a bend
    Revealing this paths end.
    As I turn around again
    Whispering to the wind
    "And this message I will send:
    Forgive me God for I have sinned"

    P.S. I'm not sure if I spelled anything wrong cause my spelling stinks and I love comments so tell me what you thought!
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    Last edited by T Elocin; Feb 04, 2005 at 05:35 PM. Reason: my name appeared right next to the poem!!!!

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    Nice poem......touching stuff.

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