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My first anime picture, so its not very good. Created in Macromedia Fireworks MX 2004.. I was going to put it in the gallery, but couldnt figure out how to add pictures there. advice on shading/hair/anything else you think it needs would be appreciated.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...eep/anime2.jpg
its ok for your fist i guess
I would say It's a good try for a first. As far as suggestions go... If it is a female (which is what I gather) she should have more rounded features in some areas; such as the chin. And for some reason she looks somewhat hunched over.... and the cleavage looks a little odd... like the shading for it goes too far. As though it's too arched or something....
Not to sound mean or anything..... it is afterall just constructive criticism.... although I'm not quite sure how to tell you how to fix these things.... I've never used a computer to create artwork.... But it is good for a first time. ^^
Not bad for your first try. My first try wasn't that good. I'm not good at drawing on computer yet so I can't comment on drawing on computer.
She looks hunched over because she is sitting down, and is leaning foward. I made the cleavage shading smaller, and fixed the chin. The chin looks loads better, thanks!
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Also, changed the IMG tags to URL because the image was much too big.
Closing.