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    my first poem here :)

    the girl i never knew

    to the girl i never knew,
    i wanna say i love you too.
    and even though i didn't know your name,
    i wanna play a few more guessing games.
    i know the winds of change have set us free,
    will you come and cry right beside me?
    that one saturday at Marriott,
    i wanted to hug and kiss you in that tub of hot (hot tub).
    youre from toronto, canada im from churchville, new york.
    even so, you'll alaways be in my heart.
    im a April, youre a December,
    i hope that you will remember, the boy from the hot tub at marriott

    on that date of 3-19-05,
    you made my heart come alive.
    between the hours of 6 and 7,
    it really felt as though i was in heaven.
    if youre hearing this right now,
    i may not know why or how.
    but listen please, all the way,
    will you be my girl today?

    ...i'll love you forever, wherever you are... how is it?
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    it was awesome!!! keep postin!!love ya!!
    -ky
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    thank you its a true one but i'll never see her again
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    Wow, youre pretty good, sure no girl could resist such poetry

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    heh heh thank you. ive got more, but theyre more violent type :Thumbd: not lady attractions :Thumbd:
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    wonderful poem!! keep up the wonderful work!!
    **********KithicEclipse**********
    ********We Are All Born*********
    ******But Why Are We Born******
    ******There Is No Meaning ******
    ***********To Live************
    *********We Just Die**********
    *****We Die A Miserable Death***
    *******Death Is Waiting********

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    Quote Originally Posted by KithicEclipse
    wonderful poem!! keep up the wonderful work!!
    Yes as a matter of fact it is wonderful..very unique as it actually has something factual in it keep up the work man..very good if u ask me

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    wow! Awsome!! Kikieru is right, any girl would love this poetry! like me! heehee

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