My Life As Poem

My Life As A Poem,
of wait that's the title, duh!
So I sit and I write,
about how my day went.
Talked to my Gedah Flaou,
her name's Shelly,
but I call her Garden Flower.
that's what the Gedah Flaou means...
so she wants to be around me,
but she has a man...
dang it all... and she's cute too...
man......
oh well, I'll be her friend.
she likes hanging around me anyway.
Now I'm talking to my friend,
who lives waaaaayyyyyy up North.
She waiting for me,
to finish this poem...
or is it a story....?
i don't know anymore...
well, my life's getter better,
but a plague still over me...
do i talk to my friend whom i pained,
or does she not "care" anymore.
oh well... My Daily Struggle....
........ huh?
oh wait... my poem was called,
My Life is A Poem...
...
back up and rewrite..............
... (typing)
So that's,
My Life As A Poem.......

By Justin McCormick (K' Heart) "Yeah, I know... I'm weird..."

:) i dont know what to say i-ther i'm :confused: confused but sound good :D good job :thumb:

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Originally Posted by kenshi2885

:) i dont know what to say i-ther i'm :confused: confused but sound good :D good job :thumb:

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This poem is my life... and your right... it doesn't make sense. This WAS a good day, till now.

Im sorry dont hate me,
but i dont feel like thats a poem i imagine you just talking.

to me the way i creat poems i try to use the least amount of words as possiable but allow you to feel STrong emotion,

thats how i write, but im telling you this because i just like how poems are put into different aspect of writing,

soo good poem and hope to see all of you Ghostwriters with some powerful words

-simple

Hmm........sounds good and interesthing the emotions are very good :thumb: :) :cool:

Er.. that doesn't sound much like a poem... :S:S sorry.

wowo this was a super really creative way to describe your day.....i think ill do this for a english assignment!! hehehe...............

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Originally Posted by simple

Im sorry dont hate me,
but i dont feel like thats a poem i imagine you just talking.

to me the way i creat poems i try to use the least amount of words as possiable but allow you to feel STrong emotion,

thats how i write, but im telling you this because i just like how poems are put into different aspect of writing,

soo good poem and hope to see all of you Ghostwriters with some powerful words

-simple

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Well, this was a poem of little emotion from me, which is unusual for me. I was just goofing around. And with me, all comments are alright. Not every work can be good. And with mine, only a few are good. I appreciate your comments. If you want emotion, look back at my poem )Blackness(.... it's a favorite of mine.