My Mistakes [P]

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Apr 21, 2005, 10:15 PM
esthered

My Mistakes [P]

My Mistakes

This pending sorrow in my head,

This black burnt wood smells like my fate.

Tiny circles of happiness,

Lets me slip into unconciousness.

I don't want to live no more.

Dreaming is all that matters.

Separated from reality,

I run-

Into an endless road of pain,

My flesh turns grey and cold,

My blood into ice.

The wind bites my back as I fall...

Deep into the bed of roses

As I dream a dream of reality.

Thorms of the rose prick my ever-aching back.

Yet I'm never to wake again,

Surrounded by the pain of my mistakes.

Notes : I wrote this poem when I was actually psycho-suicidal and going on a suicidal spree of panadaols. (Which is a very painful way to die, so don't ever do it, thank you very much.) Lol, I think you're all sick of me posting sad and depressing poems already, but I can only write when I'm upset.. :]
Apr 22, 2005, 06:58 AM
lord nikon

I once had a poem like this one, its great i'll try too find it, nice job.
Apr 23, 2005, 06:16 AM
deidre_the_goddess

nice poem,,,
I take your notes, dont worry?!!
Apr 23, 2005, 03:23 PM
kenshi2885

mistake sad but true i like that that's was good very good
Apr 23, 2005, 04:31 PM
narrator

Again, very very heartfelt and touching. Nice job here
Apr 23, 2005, 06:34 PM
T Elocin

No way! keep them coming! Your poems are very well written. I pretty much only write when I'm upset too. Nice job on this one
Apr 24, 2005, 03:03 AM
deaths_raver667

fantasitcally written, though from the sounds of it and my knowledge of basic psychology i think that you don't really want to die, your just calling out for people, and thats a good thing, i like it when people make these silent screams for help, cos i like helping, so if you need someone with a small knowledge of psychology and a big heart i'm here to hear you
Apr 24, 2005, 06:35 AM
esthered

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Originally Posted by deaths_raver667

fantasitcally written, though from the sounds of it and my knowledge of basic psychology i think that you don't really want to die, your just calling out for people, and thats a good thing, i like it when people make these silent screams for help, cos i like helping, so if you need someone with a small knowledge of psychology and a big heart i'm here to hear you

Yeah, thank you. :] Well, I went to a psychaitrist after awhile. (Not that I'm psycho or anything) And I got heaps better! :]