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    My Mistakes [P]

    My Mistakes

    This pending sorrow in my head,

    This black burnt wood smells like my fate.

    Tiny circles of happiness,

    Lets me slip into unconciousness.

    I don't want to live no more.

    Dreaming is all that matters.

    Separated from reality,

    I run-

    Into an endless road of pain,

    My flesh turns grey and cold,

    My blood into ice.

    The wind bites my back as I fall...

    Deep into the bed of roses

    As I dream a dream of reality.

    Thorms of the rose prick my ever-aching back.

    Yet I'm never to wake again,

    Surrounded by the pain of my mistakes.


    Notes : I wrote this poem when I was actually psycho-suicidal and going on a suicidal spree of panadaols. (Which is a very painful way to die, so don't ever do it, thank you very much.) Lol, I think you're all sick of me posting sad and depressing poems already, but I can only write when I'm upset.. :]

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    I once had a poem like this one, its great i'll try too find it, nice job.

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    nice poem,,,
    I take your notes, dont worry?!!

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    mistake sad but true i like that that's was good very good

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    Again, very very heartfelt and touching. Nice job here

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    No way! keep them coming! Your poems are very well written. I pretty much only write when I'm upset too. Nice job on this one

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    fantasitcally written, though from the sounds of it and my knowledge of basic psychology i think that you don't really want to die, your just calling out for people, and thats a good thing, i like it when people make these silent screams for help, cos i like helping, so if you need someone with a small knowledge of psychology and a big heart i'm here to hear you
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    Quote Originally Posted by deaths_raver667
    fantasitcally written, though from the sounds of it and my knowledge of basic psychology i think that you don't really want to die, your just calling out for people, and thats a good thing, i like it when people make these silent screams for help, cos i like helping, so if you need someone with a small knowledge of psychology and a big heart i'm here to hear you
    Yeah, thank you. :] Well, I went to a psychaitrist after awhile. (Not that I'm psycho or anything) And I got heaps better! :]

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