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My Return..Poem
Oh yeah Im back!! With a brand spankin new poem...BEING USED
In their eyes,
you are using again.
A puppet of some sinister
substance,
siphoned of
substantiality.
You strut without feeling
yo feet,
as a pallbearer to your
self, inside.
Your words stated with
sureness
are not attached to
ideas.
Hollywood taught you to
want always more.
Now you are used by
your using.
You run, but the user is
in you,
and you cannot escape...
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Hmmm...I like! Very good to have a realpoem every once a while. Too many things are considered 'good'. ^_^. Thank you and keep up the good work.
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Thank you, this poem is based on my feelings of celebrities, drug abuse, and drinking. All very not cool
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All ills of society, im glad you brought them up. IF you want, take a look at my poems.
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well quite done poem wrath, good work keep it up dude!!!!
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Thanks, but Im a girl....^_^
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I thought so, the pic was a food hint.
So I guess you are a babe then ^_^
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