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wow, thats fantastic, i love it, best one i've seen here yet, though i'm a little sceptical about the cross burning her in real life, or had you just happened to hold it over a bunsen burner beforre you placed it on her head? great work keep it up
The first time I met my friend
I delayed before saying hi
I could've swore she was a vampire
And beleive me this isn't a lie
Vampire's are dead right?
Cause she was awfully blue
...That means they're cold?
Well; she had and icy hue
She'd smile just enough
So her large, white fangs would show
And when the lights turned off
I swear her eyes would glow
With dark hair, pale skin, and dark colored clothes
I geuss i just sorta assumed
That she slept in a coffin all through the day
And at night...well...she 'consumed'
By now, of course, I know
That my theory just isn't true
She's just a person, a human,
Like me or like you
But sometimes I still wonder,
Laughing at the cross on her head,
When i jokeingly put it there
But it burnt her instead.
I know its a little different than my usual poems but i couldn't help but write a poem like this when MY friend was the inspiration; cause all my friends are strange......yeeah. so anyways this is a true story thing if ur wondering; hope u liked it!!
"I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
-Unknown
wow, thats fantastic, i love it, best one i've seen here yet, though i'm a little sceptical about the cross burning her in real life, or had you just happened to hold it over a bunsen burner beforre you placed it on her head? great work keep it up
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well; actually its funny. when something rubs against her skin it turns pink where it touched. like if she scratched her neck pink/red lines would appear on her neck. So it was really funny when i put the cross on her forehead joking with her.
"I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
-Unknown
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kool poen T Elocin i also have friends that are weird, they called themselves wiccans!!!!keep it up T Elocin!!!!!
haha YOUR frinds are strange.... i pray for mine four times a second....
back to ur work: i loved it it was different bt in a good way, youve never truely expressed stuff the way you did this time!! good job babi!!
NEUROPORT...YOU NEED A NUEROSURGEON TO FIX YA!! wat the hell does the net have to do with this? if you cant post anything helpful like decent criticism or encouragement dont post at all!! damn if T was nt a friend id blow it off but damn boy...ill talk fr my frinds if i need to
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Cool your jets, love.NEUROPORT...YOU NEED A NUEROSURGEON TO FIX YA!! wat the hell does the net have to do with this? if you cant post anything helpful like decent criticism or encouragement dont post at all!! damn if T was nt a friend id blow it off but damn boy...ill talk fr my frinds if i need to
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