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    Sleepless

    There we were running
    Courtney,Carly,You and I
    Running the wind just blowing
    The laughter escaped our mouths like the drops of rain escaping the clouds
    We could hear the music that never was
    The lost chord,
    Our hearts beating
    Our blood flowing
    All in harmony the moment was perfect

    Then we arrived at our destination
    The pool
    It was closed but we snuck in
    I jumped in abandoning all reasonable thought
    You said I was daring and rebellious
    You said you wished you could be like me
    We were all wet
    We had to get dry
    We ran as fast as we could
    We found this little jungle gym
    And I found a picture perfect view
    Then Courtney took pictures of me and you
    That was Saturday and I think of it now
    Even though I'm not you as I wish I could be
    Even though your not me
    I think we both were one
    Our souls in harmony
    And even though I'm not perfect
    At that split moment I didn't care
    I felt beautiful with just you there
    I wish I could tell you how I really feel
    But I'm not so out going I fear
    If you get to read this
    If I get brave
    I want you to know that I care about you
    I worry about you
    I'm so glad I met you
    I'm just so glad you're here
    I want you to never disappear
    I want to relive that instant again and again
    I want you to be more than just a friend
    I have never felt such a way before
    You drive me to be me and you fill me with cheer
    All in all I wish you were here

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    Beautiful... very beautiful. I am a loss for words. that hit me right in the heart, Nice job!

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    very very nice. i think you wrote this quite well......

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