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Tear me apart.
Rip me to shreds.
Watch me cry.
Then watch me die.
This feeling inside it burns deep.
To hide it, when it never says a peep.
I look inside at the cinders.
When it is all around me.
It's my time to shine.
I'll dine on the friut of labors.
"Ok, this is a very deep an emotional poem. It has many secret's to it... so don't say it doesn't make sense. Tell me if you can fiure it out. I wanna see how deep you people's can get"
ok ok I know my theory sounds stupid, but this is the first time I took a stab at trying to understand literature...
does it have anything to do with the perspective of a cheeto?
omg...Ha...I likes the poem....Quote:
Originally Posted by pyoro-pyoro
I think ur saying that youve been DUMPED =P, then it seems as though the pain jus keeps coming bak, and that your having problems getting over it, yet though u continue life to try and live the very best that u can, you feel like society has shunned you becuz of what has happend, but then you want to become something instead of nothing, especially when it comes to a relationship ^6, and when that time comes, your finally gonna be completely happy, you'll feel like a million bucks and never have to have your heart broken again
Hehe, thats my lil interpretation of your little poem that it is ^^....am i right huh huh huh?
Ur almost right, but i didn't get dumped. try again ^-^ ur very close.Quote:
Originally Posted by boo45
you lost a very close one??
hmm, in terms yes...Quote:
Originally Posted by pyoro-pyoro
Add this to some of the other things you said and u are correct.
:thumb: great analyzing skills.
T-T an i thought it take longer for people to figure it out.
Dang....wish i was right =P, was so close now eh? Hmmmm......i think it would have to do with family members or something, i thinking its more of like your grandparent or something, hmmmm, did they die or something?